Saturday, October 27, 2007

Random Thoughts

Now a days I don't feel like studying at all. I don't pay attention in classes. Recently in a class, on 15th October, a few thoughts came across my mind. Have put them together in form of a poem. Hope you find these interesting. Please do give your comments, they work as a tonic :)


Meri sooni panahon ko nigaahon me sajaa lo tum,
Labon ki an-kahi baatien jo hain dil me chhupa lo tum,
Samaa ye jaan-sheen sa keh raha rimjhim ghataaon se,
Mohabbat ki duhaai hai, mujhe apna bana lo tum..

Teri aankhon ka jaadu teri baaton ki adaa hai jo,
Teri saanso ki garmi aur dhadkan ki sadaa hai jo,
Ye vo lamha hai jisko waqt se maine churaya hai,
Usi pal me usi aagosh me mujhko samaa lo tum..

Mere is aashiyaan me jaane kaisa gum ka sayaa hai,
Mere ashkon ki chaadar ne ye kaisa zakhm payaa hai,
Tu meri rooh hai, tu khwaab hai, tu jaan hai meri,
Tamannaon ka gulshan aaj mehfil me sajaa do tum..


Sayonara.

Dhavish

8 comments:

Rashmi Nagpal said...

nice thoughts....... but aisa lagta hai jaise aap kisiko bhut miss kar rhe hain........

K.K. said...

As usual a very chweet chweet poem :)
i added last two lines :)
Teri aankhon ka jaadu, teri baaton ki adaa hai jo,
Teri saanso ki garmi aur dhadkan ki sadaa hai jo,
Teri chehre ki hassi aur tere labo ki nami hai jo,
Tere daaman ki khusbu or tere ishq ki kashish hai jo,

Anubhav Jain said...

nice one!! meri jaaan :)

muaaahhhhh

The Unreasonable Man said...

dhavish ko lagta hain pyaar ho gaya hain phir se [:p]

escaping2nowhere said...

nice. why dont u put it in devnagri fonts?

pal said...

bahut achcha likha hai

per mujhe duhaai kuch kam
laga.....

Mohabbat ki lagan mei, mujhe apna bana lo tum..

fun2sh said...

dhavish bhai lagta hai aap kuch khoj rahe ho
i wish that u will found as soon as possible.....




tc

gudiya said...

good yaar nice one .. keep it up